Two Poem Re-Drafts

  Exclusion 

I suppose we can say, if nothing else will do,
that all things have a measure, some accounted span,
that limits make the the thing and keep its focus true,
that all things spread their being in just the ways they can.
Yet still it seems absurd, improper, even rude,
that we, like some strange gods, with reason hold full sway,
yet with a sword-kept Eden, the world dares exclude
such as us from endless life, imposing a final day.
We stamp our feet, demand the Manager give His time,
insist that we are deserving, our merit known to all,
weep at the unfairness, in anger scream and rant,
and are firmly turned away, no matter how sublime.
We feel, deep inside, that immortal regions call,
but no matter -- we try to evade death, and we can't.

Stranger in This World

God is found in a thousand clues,
lure and ruse,
through mists and in tides,
hints preparing for good news. 

The sea upon the rocks may crash and foam
but I am unencumbered by their rage,
and though I stood alone,
as the world may think alone,
with God's help I will conquer this and every age. 

Every thought that does not follow
the world's staff like foolish sheep,
every prayer that I make that it will never hear,
is a wall against the sea,
is a battle's victory;
though the wind may blow,
the waters fall in sheets,
yet nothing shall I fear,
for nothing need I fear,
and I need never fall to dark defeat. 

As moonlight falls around us
like a darker shade of pale,
a white found in the night
when the stars the heavens sail,
as breezes softly murmur beneath the vestments white
of a moon that ever wanders,
but never falters with its light,
I think a little hope is merited;
in all that we have inherited,
the little things that matter are the things that conquer most. 

The sea upon the rocks may crash and foam,
but always am I safe at home,
for if I hold my homeland in my heart, 
no one can my inside-myself from my possession part. 

A pilgrim in the world,
a seashell on my staff,
at frowning faces of the world
I am free to laugh;
and if the storms that stir the world
rise against me in a gale,
yet, though I may be weak,
I know I will prevail;
there is a promise given
that withstands the gates of hell. 

And you, yes, you, can have all the worldly things you sought,
for I will cast them all aside to see the face of God.

Welcome Home, Artemis II

 The splashdown of the Integrity module of the Artemis mission occurred in the Pacific, not too far from San Diego, I believe, at about 5:07pm today, after a picture-perfect re-entry and descent. As I write this, the US Navy is doing the work of retrieving the astronauts, who report that their condition is Green, i.e., very good. The descent was great to watch. Some things should be done just because they're wonderful.

Dashed Off XII

 rightful authority acting in an appropriately human way according to natural law for just end

The flaws of fan fiction often arise from treating a story as if it were a playable game.

Nobody in practice treats their pleasures as fungible or as all on a level.

A universe capable of being the habitation of what has dignity, itself has dignity.

The worry that immortality would be boring is the worry that thymos depends on (the possibility of) death.

"Coincidences obvious, explicit, direct, might result from truth, but would be compatible also with forgery. But oblique allusions, wherein the coincidence has to be pointed out, and does not lie on the surface, are just such as nature and truth would produce, and which no forger would ever insert." Fausset

"Coincidence consists in the concurrence or consistency of evidence. If testimony coming from two different sources perfectly agrees, and though touching upon different points harmonises in the end, we have a coincidence.---If that coincidence is manifestly undesigned, unintentional, the proof arising therefrom is proportionably stronger. The *minuteness* of a coincidence bestows greater value upon the argument founded on it; the more circuitous it is, the more difficult would it have been to fabricate; and again, if a narrative and a recapitulation of it at first sight, seem to contradict one another, but upon further investigation are ascertained to agree, then the proof of the truth and reality of the whole is augmented." George W. Hill

Becoming convinced by an argument is not an instantaneous process; where conclusions touch on matters central to a person's perspective, they can take very long to have a stable effect.

Our actual conversations with people often have very little to do with our interests and motivations.

The tendency to think of mana as a force or energy rather than a status or dignity seems reflective of late-19th and 20th century prejudices rather than of its actual roles in Polynesian and Melanesian society.

All good taste begins with insight.

Either we have human rights from the very beginning or we never really do.

Events may be by chance so as to be for the sake of something, like shuffling a deck of cards and dealing in order to play a game. Chance may itself have no particular end, but something's being by chance may have an end.

As rationality with sympathy makes us civic animals, so rationality with sexuality makes us marital animals.

Passions enable us to act even when we lack knowledge; a life of giving in to the passions is a life that can be improved but little by knowledge.

Evolution is possible because the laws of nature have greater intelligibility than what is evolved according to them; the apparent rise of order comes from the order inherent in the cosmos.

Probabilities for something being inscrutable do not rule out reasons for and against, because not all reasons are associated with definable probabilities.

Communal personal relationship is a greater good than individual personal relationship.

All authority is either bestowed, or acquired, or adjoined.

They who claim to know all God's purposes will always find themselves surprised.

Wheter 'good' or 'right' are thick or thin terms depends on context.

Every prayer requires a warrant, establishing our standing and our reason for that kind of prayer.

the interpenetration of Faith, Writ, and Church, each as an aspect of divine revelation

rumor as a mechanism for our general sense of the human community

The first step of catechizing is familiarizing with the vocabulary that makes further communication possible.

a definition of 'cringe':
-- a kind of failure
-- such as to provoke a negative aesthetic response
-- which would still allow for possible sympathetic response
-- except that the doer lacks awareness of the failure
-- in a way that is itself a social failure
-- that itself provokes a response of disapproval

Human beings think in metaphors, and the biggest divides are between people who know they are thinking in metaphors and people who think they are not doing so.

2 Sam 12:20 as type of sacrametns (baptism and eucharist, especially)

Money derives from abstractions of want.

Empiricists often confuse the beginner state and the expert state; that is, the kinds of inferences/associations of experience to which empiricists appeal are often themselves things that can only be learned over time, and are more associated with the highly experienced than originary. We do not, for instance, begin with atomistic impressions, ideas, or intuitions, but learn to analyze them out; nor kinds of association but with huge tangled masses of associated things; we learn over time different ways to develop stable expectations; etc.

Empiricism has always struggled to account for our experience of experiencing.

Brilliance and education both often founder on unexamined assumptions.

Literature grows out of ritual.

The history of the Church is a history of struggle over authority.

To understand the causal relation between grace and free will, one must first begin with the causal relations between creation and free will; the temptation is always to start somewhere else.

Since the fourth century, the clergy have not taken with adequate seriousness the problem laity face of trying to treat the Eucharist with adequate reverence while being stuck with living lives in the world that can easily erode this. Attempts by the laity to solve this problem have historically included things like rare communion, or seeking communion outside of Mass, or paraliturgical devotions, in and out of Mass, that bridge the liturgical and the more secular (like common devotional rosary prayers, adoration, etc.). In encouraging *frequent communion within a Mass in which the congregation has a direct active role*, modern bishops have, whatever the undoubted and undeniable benefits of such a policy, made the problem worse and provided nothing at all to help deal with it -- have not, in fact, even seriously acknowledged it.

We never start with clarity; we always muddle through until we clarify.

sacramentals & holy metonymy

Church Militant: the Church as sacrifice on the altar
Church Patient: the Church as sweet aroma of sacrifice
Church Triumphant: the Church as sacrifice received by God

the point of a game vs. the point of playing a game

For two probability assessments to be compared, they have to be calibrated in terms of the same field of possibilities.

When we consider our debt, we find a hierarchy: private benefactors, public benefactors, ancestors; but there seems an overplus beyond these, obligations more general even than parental/ancestral onese, and ignoring these gives our ethics a chopped-off feel. We have debts as wide as the universe itself and as deep as our existence itself. But even before those limits, we discover debts broader and deeper than the private, public, and ancestral ones we generally find in our human relations, e.g., recognizing that we owe something in some way to our broader environment.

the feeling of owing something to the beautiful or the sublime

Jn 20:22 and exsufflation rites (also Gn 2:7, Wis 15:11, Job 33:4, Ezk 37:9)

Propositions do not probabilize other propositions (outside of the analytic cases) in isolation; the links between propositions are always in light of all other relevant propositions.

An important question in Christian theology: Do you say that, or do Christ's prayerful faithful suggest that?

'the natural effects of exceptional causes'

A very large portion of human thinking is backwards -- that is, when we compare it to how it is naturally presented, it actually went in reverse from how it is presented.

mutuation: the act of borrowing or exchanging

"The contract of usury is nothing else but illiberal mutuation." Blaxton

Most major American cities are near a river and mountain fall line; riverheads of navigation and early railroad/trade-travel prominence also helps (making the place a default hub). A secondary factor is having unusually good weather for a region (e.g., shelter from storm, agricultural eminence, tourism potential). 

Theatrical performances are ritually demarcated.

sources of possible injustice in contract: direct loss, indirect loss, direct risk, indirect risk, uncompensated broader service, direct coercion, indirect coercion

assertion and denial --> domains of discourse --> manifold of domains --> world as limit

We describe the world with layers of kinds of assertion and denial.

principle of noncontradiction --> being ut primum cognitum --> being as primary and secondary --> creative being and creature being

ancestral piety as a bridge to religious piety

the extrinsic quasi-intrinsic and the intrinsic quasi-extrinsic

'quod quis vehementer desiderat, facile credit' Aquinas (2-2.162.3ad2), of the proud man

Green and grue imply different causal claims about the world.

Real grue-like classifications imply intelligence. (It's because we sometimes organize the world in grue-like ways that grue classifications seem possible.)

Induction is related to expectation not from bare series but to expectation from established possibilities.

Fiction/Nonfiction is a functional distinction, based on the kinds of function a thing affords in broader discourse.

fiction vs. mistaken nonfiction

durability of analogy

One of the functions of obligations in reasoning is to distinguish the morally stupid from the merely nonideal.

Positive law presupposes language already having legal force.

The notion that illocutionary force is 'suspended' when an actor says something on stage, is obviously absurd, and shows a complete philistinism about drama. Stage utterance shifts perlocutionary force in aiming at aesthetic effect in the audience; but it cannot do this if illocutionary force changes much.

In the Incarnation, theology became fully philosophical while not reducing to philosophy.

Much of political discourse is argument over the best metaphors.

inference from the best metaphor

We develop foresight out of hindsight.

There is vast power in the death of a good person.

Hallowed Be Thy Name: faith
Thy Kingdom Come: hope
Thy Will Be Done: love

A remarkable amount of the Industrial Revolution is due to northwest England happening to find low-sulfur coal deposits near iron deposits.

What is one's right is an offshoot of what is prudent.

tantundem
In irregular deposit, one gives the depository money to create a custody of the tantundem (the equivalent quantiity), with the tantundem to be returned on demand.

"...while all God's actions manifest both, justice is less causative than mercy, and explains less about a divine action." James Chastek

Dante's depictions of infernal punishment are somewhat limited by the fact that his means can only represent sins qua principal or dominating vices.

People do not evaluate debates logically but rhetorically.

Institutions within and under law can be artifacts; this is different from saying that law itself, or the legal system itself, is an artifact.

Law is more often used to simplify coordination problems than to solve them.

All legal systems get their primary unity from reason. 

Tamanaha's "The Problems with Artifact Legal Theory" -- very good

Prices pre-exist money, being measurements in exchange.

forms of deontic causation
(1) imposed (e.g., on pets)
(2) delegated (e.g., soldiers, servants)
(3) dispositive/framework (e.g., citizens)
(4) contractual

The yir'ah of the Lord: fear, awe, reverence, respect
Ps 55:5 yir'ah = horror/fear/terror

ga'on Micah 5:$, Pr 16:18
=highness, overness (ga'avah works similarly)

Rationally coming to know presupposes the falsehood of determinism with respect to coming to know, because rationally coming to know precludes the conclusion and the inquiry being set in advance.

Human beings are constantly deriving physical conclusions from moral and a priori conclusions; it's why, ofr instance, we characterize alleged physical situations as absurd or obvious, impossible or necessary, explicable or inexplicable, conceivable or inconceivable.

The things that matter most cannot be deserved.

The distinction between a priori and a posteriori has to be teased out of our reasoning, which almost always intertwines both.

Ps 4:5 penance
Ps 4:6 eucharist
Ps 4:7 baptism (lumen) and confirmation (laetitia)
Ps 4:8 orders
Ps 4:9 unction
[these verses are numbered slightly differently depending on the version]

first principles as signate light

"Virtue is more precise and better than every art, as is nature as well." Aristotle NE 1106b

ordered structures that replace the need for particular trust with the need for only general trust

A population of living things often works somewhat like a living thing (herding, flocking, territorial defense, pack hunting, etc.).

Hope in a Morning Blighted

 April Sonnet II: April Cruel
by Francis Bennoch

April, ah me! how swiftly changes come,
How soon the month we love we learn to hate,
When boughs deflowered hang down disconsolate,
And clouds of grief make dark our garden home,
Where genial shunshine lingering loved to wait;
With joy we grafted in thy wounded rind
The fairest branch that ever blossom bore;
Clasped close, incorporate as one combined,
A newborn rapture trembled in thy core
As budding life expanded, more and more
We longed to reap the fruit; but woke to find
Hope in a morning blighted; from the shore
A ruthless wind stole with untimely frost,
And all thy cherished bloom was shrivelled, loosed, and lost.

April, 1855

Birthtime of Beauty and of Poesy

 April Sonnet I: April Kind
by Francis Bennoch 

April, though treacherous and changeling named,
Wanton and wayward in thy nature, still
Revealest thou those mysteries that fill
All hearts with love's deep sympathy, and famed
For blooms that odorous balm distil.
Birthtime of beauty and of poesy:
When birds betrothed melodious from the hill
Rain down their morning song of ecstasy.
When amorous bees toy fondly with the flower,
And drain its humid sweets deliriously,
Faint with excess, in love's delicious bower
Softly infolded, blossom-couched he lies:
Whilst draughts of fragrant dew oblivious sleep supplies. 

 April, 1855.

Habitude XXXI

 It seems that synderesis is a sort of specific power distinct from others, for what falls under one division seems to be of one kind. But in Jerome's Gloss on Ezek. I, synderesis is divided from the irascible, the concupiscible, and the rational, which are sorts of powers. Therefore synderesis is a sort of power.

Further, opposites are of one genus. But synderesis and sensuality seem to be opposed, because synderesis always inclines to the good, but sensuality always to the bad, hence it is signified by the serpent, as is obvious from Augustine, De Trin. XII. It seems therefore that synderesis is a power, as is sensuality.

Further, Augustine says, in the book on free choice, that in natural judgment there are sorts of rules and seeds of virtues that are true and immutable, and these we call synderesis. Since, therefore, the immutable rules by which we judge pertain to reason according to its higher part, as Augustine says in De Trin. XII, it seems that synderesis is the same as reason. And so it is a sort of power.

But contrariwise, rational powers have themselves [se habet] to opposites, according to the Philosopher. But synderesis does not have itself to opposites, but is inclined only to good. Therefore synderesis is not a power. For it were a power, it would need to be a rational power, for its not found in beasts.

I respond that it must be said that synderesis is not power but habitude, though some have proposed that synderesis is a sort of power higher than reason, while others have said that it is reason itself, not as reason, but as nature. But to make this evident, it must be considered that, as was said above, human reason, as it is a sort of change, proceeds from intellection of some things, to wit, those naturally familiar [naturaliter notorum] apart from investigation of reason, as from a sort of immutable source. and it is also ended in intellection, inasmuch as we judge from sources naturally familiar to us through themselves [per se naturaliter nota], about those things which we discover by reasoning. Now it is sure that, just as reflective reason reasons about reflective matters, practical reasons reasons about workable matters. Therefore they must be instilled in us naturally, just as sources of reflective matters, sources of workable matters. Now the first sources of reflective matters naturally instilled in us do not pertain to any specific power, but to a sort of specific habitude, which is called intellection of sources, as is obvious in Ethic. VI. So also sources of workable matters naturally instilled in us do not pertain to a specific power but to a specific natural habitude, which we call synderesis. So too synderesis is said to incite to good and to grumble about bad, inasmuch as we proceed through first sources to discover, and to judge the discovered. It is obvious, therefore, that synderesis is not power but natural habitude.

To the first, therefore, it must be said that Jerome's division is directed toward diversity of acts, not diversity of powers. But different acts can be of one power.

To the second it must be said that likewise the opposition of synderesis and sensuality is directed to opposition of acts, not according to different species of one genus.

To the third it must be said that these immutable reasons are the first sources of workable matters, about which it does not happen to err; and they are attributed to reason as power and to synderesis as habitude. So too we naturally judge by both, to wit, reason and synderesis. 

[Thomas Aquinas, ST 1.79.12, my translation. The Latin is here, the Dominican Fathers translation is here. ]

I should have done this article when discussing natural habitudes, but forgot; this will be an OK place to insert it, though.

'Synderesis', as one would expect from St. Thomas's comments, comes from St. Jerome; Jerome would have actually written syneidesis, which he glosses as scintilla conscientiae, the spark of consciousness/conscience. Conscientia is the direct Latin translation of syneidesis, and they both literally mean 'co-awareness/co-knowing'. A corruption entered into the manuscript tradition, so syneidesis became synderesis. 

St. Thomas distinguishes synderesis and conscience. He notes in the next article that synderesis is often called conscience by a figure of speech, but he reserves 'synderesis' for the habitude that is the understanding of practical principles and 'conscience' for the act that actually applies such principles in witnessing, judging, excusing, accusing, or punishing. Of course, in modern English, 'conscience' is used for both synderesis and conscience.

As a natural habitude, synderesis would fit into the taxonomy of natural habitudes as a natural habitude directed to operation according to the nature of the species, arising partly from nature, partly from external source, in apprehensive powers, just like its counterpart for speculative principles, and both are completed by cultivating intellectual virtues. For synderesis, this cultivation, especially of prudence, is what we are talking about when we talk about 'formation of conscience'.

And Sweet Is Sweet

 Envoy
by Francis Thompson 

Go, songs, for ended is our brief, sweet play;
Go, children of swift joy and tardy sorrow:
And some are sung, and that was yesterday,
And some unsung, and that may be to-morrow. 

Go forth; and if it be o’er stony way,
Old joy can lend what newer grief must borrow:
And it was sweet, and that was yesterday,
And sweet is sweet, though purchasèd with sorrow. 

Go, songs, and come not back from your far way:
And if men ask you why ye smile and sorrow,
Tell them ye grieve, for your hearts know To-day,
Tell them ye smile, for your eyes know To-morrow.