Monday, January 08, 2007

Murdering Rastari, Part IV

Part I, Part II, and Part III of this short story draft.

Needless to say, we couldn't just hop off to a hunting cabin with Rastari in the state he was in. We had to wait patiently nearly three months before we could even broach the subject. In the meantime, I visited Rastari two or three times a week. It was a difficult task, but I believe that discipline is the better part of virtue. I soon came up with a way to endure Rastari's endless laughter and annoying jokes. I would imagine his face turning blue, slowly deepening to black, and his laughing mouth contorting to a sheer agony, as the poison did its work to rid the world of the man and save all that was good and holy. It was lovely, and there is no way I could have endured as much of Rastari as I did if I had not hit upon it.

As Rastari grew better, I began to broach the subject of getting away to the cabin for a good weekend's hunt. Being the complete idiot that he is, he agreed it would be fun, and soon began actively talking of it whenever we met.

So it was that we eventually found ourselves in a hunting cabin with Danny Rastari, watching with a certain amount of abstract pleasure as he wolfed down the poison-laced food we had prepared for him. It was only a matter of time before the world would be in a better state; we settled in for a short wait.

The short wait began to stretch out into a long wait. Finally, Max took me aside and said, "I don't think it's working."

"I thought you were sure it would."

Max shrugged. "I don't know what happened. Perhaps he's immune."

"Well," I said, thinking, "do you know of any other poisons we could use."

"I think we need to move beyond poisons," Max replied. "Poison is too fickle. We need a more effective method. Something quicker."

As he picked up a heavy log from beside the fire, a chill went down my spine. "No, no, no," I whispered as forcefully as I could without alerting Danny. "We can't murder him; we just want him dead."

"The only thing that will kill him is the trauma to the back of his head. I'll just be helping it to start," Max replied, and, before I could stop him, he had rushed up on Rastari and, wielding the log like a baseball hat, had hit him with full force across the back of the head.

The sound the log made when it hit his head was sickening; I expected Danny to fall like a stone. Apparently his skull was harder than even I had thought, though, because he only staggered back, holding his head. He shouted something I didn't quite hear in the confusion; but Max was already swinging the log again. It missed as Rastari scrambled out of the way.

For the next minute or two they played what looked almost like a gruesome game of blind man's bluff, with Max swinging recklessly and Rastari dodging like a madman. Finally Rastari managed to fling the door open and sprint out into the woods.

Exasperated, Max threw the log aside and grabbed his hunting rifle.

"I owe you an apology," he said as he made sure the rifle was loaded, "for setting us on the poison trail. You had the right idea originally. It will have to be a hunting accident."

"Wait," I replied. "Surely it won't be an accident if you deliberately do it?"

"I won't be deliberately doing anything but aiming the gun. The bullet will do the rest," Max replied, and before I could stop him he ran out the door after Rastari.

After a moment of shock at the violent turn of the night's events, I followed. There was really nothing else I could do. If the world was to be made a better place for virtue, Rastari had to die.

More to follow.


  1. Itinérante6:17 AM

    What did Rastari do?!
    This is a very peculiar story. I really like it!
    And I seem to always lose the final parts, the search engine clearly is not my fan!

  2. branemrys4:38 PM

    I don't think I ever finished this story.

  3. branemrys11:40 PM

    I can tell you, though, how it would have ended. Danny Rastari survives, as does the narrator. Max does not; which is fine, because Max doesn't actually exist. The narrator has a delusional psychosis.

  4. Itinérante2:41 AM

    Oh wow! That one is really good!
    The narrator did seem to have a mental illness. I was amused and revolted at the same time by his idea of "helping nature get rid of" and not admitting it was killing. It was too apathetic to be normal. You have done a wonderful job in that!
    I really do wish you had time to finish it though! One of my university majors was psychology and my thesis was on Schizophrenia and Delusional Psychosis: An anthropological study.


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